diff --git a/CONTRIBUTING.md b/CONTRIBUTING.md
index db1dafb..224d238 100644
--- a/CONTRIBUTING.md
+++ b/CONTRIBUTING.md
@@ -5,8 +5,8 @@ This is a curated collection of "dramatic" github interactions.
 There's no agreement on what's considered dramatic enough to be included
 in github-drama. Everyone has a different sense of humor. There are plenty
 of "non-serious" github threads, ones where the usual github politeness
-gave way to reaction gifs and one-word replies, ultimately turning into
-something like a 4chan thread without the wit.
+gave way to reaction gifs and one-word replies, turning into something like
+a 4chan thread without the wit.
 
 In this repository, we'll go by the general guideline: if anyone in the thread
 appears to be getting really worked up about something, it should be considered